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Message by ~neo-gbuddha:iconneo-gbuddha:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


when this is written
remember not the hand that wrote it
   a somber piano playing down my life
remeber not the soul in absense
learn you passion
save not from the hate
but remember the feeling you had
when your life finally began
and ended
rember not what you have
but what you lost
time will tell
i'm sorry i'm not there
to tell you
theres so much more i wanted to...

entophy's call will speak
remeber not what it said
but what it yearns for
hail you lonlely soul
hail you wondering mind
when it comes to bear
that you can no loner go
and you seek to follow me
so much to live for
so much to die for
you have a heart,
hasten not to drown in the beauty of lies
remeber not what has been said
remeber the absense of my voice
and remeber what you're fighting for
©2004-2010 ~neo-gbuddha
:iconneo-gbuddha:

Author's Comments

A message to the lonly souls that wish to follow me,

for all those who have a drive, but no purpose

for all those who seek salvation, remeber it thought damnation

a message to all those after me

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~phoenixtx Apr 4, 2004, 12:36:08 AM
this is beautiful, very emotional. :heart:

--
found religion inside myself
i drank the blood, the flesh was stale
:icontattered-angel:
~Tattered-Angel Apr 4, 2004, 12:51:35 AM
Great emotion behind it. Although some of the lines I have swear I have heard before but I can't think of where like "remember not the hand that wrote it
a sweet piano playing down my life" .....hmmm anyway. I really like this.
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~neo-gbuddha Apr 4, 2004, 1:11:11 AM
i think i know where, there was this weird which hunter robin remix thing i found, i was probly listening it when i wrote it, i checked and the acual lyrics are something like "when you see the sign, remeber the hand that wrote it...., and then some time later "time will speak like a piano, plaing out the life"

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How strange it is to be awakened these few insightful moments, and come to find that you mind has already been raped by a god.
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~SimpleMinion Apr 4, 2004, 1:14:34 AM
I like it, parenthetical line breaks as if typed directly from thought

I thought is sounded vaguely familiar....

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adjectives on the typewriter
he moves his words like a prize fighter
the frenzied pace of the mind inside the cell

:icontattered-angel:
~Tattered-Angel Apr 4, 2004, 1:18:38 AM
hmm I havent heard any Witch Hunter Robin stuff (its a great show tho)

I remeber now though! I was thinking of the words from the lyrics of a Nightwish song; Dead Boy's Poem.

"If you read this line, remember not the hand that wrote it
Remember only the verse, songmaker`s cry, the one without tears
For I`ve given this its strength and it has become my only strength.
Comforting home, mother`s lap, chance for immortality
Where being wanted became a thrill I never knew
The sweet piano writing down my life"

"Teach me passion for I fear it`s gone
Show me love, hold the lorn
So much more I wanted to give to the ones who love me
I`m sorry
Time will tell (this bitter farewell)
I live no more to shame nor me nor you

And you... I wish I didn`t feel for you anymore... "
:iconneo-gbuddha:
~neo-gbuddha Apr 4, 2004, 1:20:57 AM
thats probly it, i have a weird version of something like that, i guess it was written for WHR. the one i got has a crappy sound to it, but thats because its attached to a crappy video of WHR

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How strange it is to be awakened these few insightful moments, and come to find that you mind has already been raped by a god.
:icontattered-angel:
~Tattered-Angel Apr 4, 2004, 1:22:14 AM
Heh, well the Nightwish song is pretty good. Hey do you have any messengers I can talk to you on?
:iconneo-gbuddha:
~neo-gbuddha Apr 4, 2004, 1:27:34 AM
not really at the moment
i have aim, but its kinda spartic at the moment, you can note me, if u need too, i'll try aim, sn on my mainpage, but note first

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How strange it is to be awakened these few insightful moments, and come to find that you mind has already been raped by a god.
:iconphoenixzero:
~Phoenixzero Apr 11, 2004, 6:06:30 PM
i love the emotion to this poem....it just grabbed me....great poem

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If "Fate "has already been decided,cannot the thing against it be done? Cannot the thing to change it be done if already provided for "End"? "Future" is one
There is always only one
But
"Absolutely" There is no being like the one,
The person
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